tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8132157367522602811.comments2018-04-24T14:42:40.018-07:00Machchar's Spilled InkUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger57125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8132157367522602811.post-53473217168739548542018-04-24T14:42:40.018-07:002018-04-24T14:42:40.018-07:00May be it was him.. ;)
Glad you liked it :)May be it was him.. ;) <br />Glad you liked it :)Mansihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15904368343985965786noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8132157367522602811.post-41996795640675189592018-04-24T14:38:11.264-07:002018-04-24T14:38:11.264-07:00"Music was the only problem".. I will as..."Music was the only problem".. I will ask my Latino gym buddy if it was him.. nicely written!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11687835920439102255noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8132157367522602811.post-6787334755328247182014-12-20T01:59:42.095-08:002014-12-20T01:59:42.095-08:00humm,,, looks like few lines at end are missing,,,...humm,,, looks like few lines at end are missing,,, you have not placed complete version?!...vedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15937664122744601114noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8132157367522602811.post-30281195789956319892014-07-16T00:20:43.232-07:002014-07-16T00:20:43.232-07:00or may be I hear this voice into my ears.. may be ...or may be I hear this voice into my ears.. may be He wants to kill meMansihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15904368343985965786noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8132157367522602811.post-85947321094469088342014-07-15T21:57:30.749-07:002014-07-15T21:57:30.749-07:00this looks you want to kill someone you love!!! Re...this looks you want to kill someone you love!!! Revenge of the purest form!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8132157367522602811.post-43350275703434256402014-07-15T08:18:34.380-07:002014-07-15T08:18:34.380-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.Mansihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15904368343985965786noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8132157367522602811.post-86651143257573711762014-07-15T06:22:19.470-07:002014-07-15T06:22:19.470-07:00no..just a naive attempt!! i'm not as good as ...no..just a naive attempt!! i'm not as good as you are!! btw..wats your email add!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8132157367522602811.post-53865138934079825212014-07-15T06:00:21.278-07:002014-07-15T06:00:21.278-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.Mansihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15904368343985965786noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8132157367522602811.post-16337234379730422122014-07-15T03:38:22.654-07:002014-07-15T03:38:22.654-07:00lafzon ka khel hai..koi adhura hai..kahi tanhai ha...lafzon ka khel hai..koi adhura hai..kahi tanhai hai...kahi ulfat hai.. kahi judaii hai.... shab-e-gam hai mohabbat ka tofa.. kisi udaasi mein kisi ki parchai hai.... aksar mohabbat guzar jaati hai rehguzar se hamare...kabhi woh bewafaa nikli...aur kabhi tumne ki bewafaai hai.... guzar gaya hai jo..usse yaad karne se kya fayda.....yaadon ka bojh hai.... kabhi mand si muskan hai...kabhi ruswai hai.....adhoore ho agar tum to yeh yaad rakho....jise chord aaye the dur.....woh tumhari hi parchayi hai!!!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8132157367522602811.post-83817318542110693352014-07-14T21:35:45.380-07:002014-07-14T21:35:45.380-07:00haan.. I mean shab-e-gham...haan.. I mean shab-e-gham...Mansihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15904368343985965786noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8132157367522602811.post-58374078086358175702014-07-14T20:02:58.048-07:002014-07-14T20:02:58.048-07:00hmmm...profound!! I hope you didnt mean to write s...hmmm...profound!! I hope you didnt mean to write shab-e-gam!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8132157367522602811.post-26147637006710238812014-07-09T01:22:13.758-07:002014-07-09T01:22:13.758-07:00ofcourse I'm from and in India or how else you...ofcourse I'm from and in India or how else you expect me to understand Hindi/Urdu!! <br /><br />Although smartness is a perspective or a trick referred to in different context, I'm not sure which one you really mean. <br /><br />Having said that, Cheers for Metallica!! Do you intend to keep writing dedications!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8132157367522602811.post-24259383021585780092014-07-09T01:20:10.246-07:002014-07-09T01:20:10.246-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8132157367522602811.post-20808660445435282822014-07-09T00:01:40.130-07:002014-07-09T00:01:40.130-07:00You know you are very smart, right?
btw, my Google...You know you are very smart, right?<br />btw, my Google analytics say you are in India. Nice!<br /><br />and I love Metallica :)Mansihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15904368343985965786noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8132157367522602811.post-84275623403553024652014-07-08T23:42:28.925-07:002014-07-08T23:42:28.925-07:00i believe everyone's uforgiven in some or the ...i believe everyone's uforgiven in some or the other way. You are always denied the one thing you want, or to be put more aptly, what you desire. People don't realise it. Some just. And then you have Metallica!! What's your connection with this "word".Since I see you are somehow triggered by the mention of it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8132157367522602811.post-43055717206830954292014-07-08T23:37:14.517-07:002014-07-08T23:37:14.517-07:00Do you also write?
why are you unforgiven? ;)Do you also write? <br />why are you unforgiven? ;)Mansihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15904368343985965786noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8132157367522602811.post-26246340924432774622014-07-08T23:19:29.929-07:002014-07-08T23:19:29.929-07:00I'm not sure if I understood your last comment...I'm not sure if I understood your last comment with the hashtag of detest. Anyway keep writing!! you write well!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8132157367522602811.post-88690742777499052712014-07-08T21:14:35.456-07:002014-07-08T21:14:35.456-07:00Yes, it is for you!! #HolyShitYes, it is for you!! #HolyShitMansihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15904368343985965786noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8132157367522602811.post-6677826992837548542014-07-08T20:38:39.464-07:002014-07-08T20:38:39.464-07:00what's the coincidence here!! did someone dub ...what's the coincidence here!! did someone dub thee unforgiven too!! Anyway you described yourself quite well in the poem.. Is this me?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8132157367522602811.post-5564124801980698442014-07-08T03:49:02.732-07:002014-07-08T03:49:02.732-07:00May be you are right...
So are you also Unforgive...May be you are right... <br />So are you also Unforgiven? #coincidence Mansihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15904368343985965786noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8132157367522602811.post-82110413269642642382014-07-08T01:59:50.938-07:002014-07-08T01:59:50.938-07:00looks like a dedication to a poet who was totally ...looks like a dedication to a poet who was totally dedicated to you!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8132157367522602811.post-3997294589369738322014-05-01T06:12:37.465-07:002014-05-01T06:12:37.465-07:00Happy to see you are still active and into writing...Happy to see you are still active and into writing poems, more so, you still have strong reasons to write poems, i hope that person is reading these poems, whom they are meant for. vedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15937664122744601114noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8132157367522602811.post-40340222430036479262014-01-06T14:52:50.135-08:002014-01-06T14:52:50.135-08:00Thanks for the encouragement, Indu :)Thanks for the encouragement, Indu :)Mansihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15904368343985965786noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8132157367522602811.post-4215017581256181412014-01-06T13:12:11.222-08:002014-01-06T13:12:11.222-08:00Beautiful...wonderful expression of emotions/thoug...Beautiful...wonderful expression of emotions/thoughts/feelings.., nicely writtenInduhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12585244299769882450noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8132157367522602811.post-15097694480192931952013-05-22T14:21:42.681-07:002013-05-22T14:21:42.681-07:00I'm trying to get back to writing. :)I'm trying to get back to writing. :)Mansihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15904368343985965786noreply@blogger.com